my ref sheet for Aiden Viscard and Ellixandria Isis still not finished he made this and he's working on the clored version aswell i think
Aiden's colors: he has a dark purple silk suit which is torn at the sleeves with a black tie he has black hair and brown eyes
Ellixandria's colors: she has blonde hair and bright blue eyes she wears a pink flowing sun dress and a sun hat with a big red bow tied around it and uh in the picture she isnt wearing them but she's supposed to be wearing gladiator sandals
Aiden's personallity: Kinda of childish but if he needs to he will get his act together and be serious loves a good fight hates boring ones he says that they "waste his time" and when he wants to be a very nasty and creepy villain though rarely VERY rarely he has a sense of emotion and cares but Ellixandria and sometimes himself points this out and he hates it to the poin where he almost gives up being a villain
Ellixandria's personallity: though she can be girly at times shes very deadly shes kind to anyone she likes (aside from Aiden she treats him normaly not kind not curel odd relationship) before you do somthing that makes her made make sure your friends. one wrong step and this beauty can and will kill you (as long as your not important to her or Aiden) P.S. only Aiden calls her Elli
Aiden's job: aside from being a villain Aiden has his mansion not by robbing banks or stores he gets his money from his job owning a construction tool business selling everything you need to construction companys (even though he's never touched a tool in his life)
Ellixandria's job: dosnt really have one she lives in the mansion with Aiden she takes care of the garden out back and cleans from time to time and if Aiden needs it she makes him a doll to fight with (explained in a sec)
Aidens fighting style: makes sharp threads come from his fingers and stab his enemys like spears he can make his threads tie themselves together to form a weapon such as a naginata [link] or a sword and Shield or two shield's or two swords
more skilled with the naginata then the sword and shield with his thread he can take control of anything resembling a human and/or animal such as dolls plushies or mannequin's but rarely dose so though with objects that can move on there own such as robots and mannequin's that move on there own with magic basically anything that dosnt need another object/force to move it
Ellixandria's fighting style: throws knives at her enemys with increadable speed and great aim she can also fight at close range but likes long range more
Aiden Age: 21 Magic (threads) 4/5 strangth: 3/5 Defence: 2/5 (3/5 if he's using his sword and shield or 3.5/5 with two shield's) Seed: 3.5/5
Ellixandria: Age: 20 Magic: n/a (dosnt use magic) Strangth: When throwing 3/5 when in close range 3.5/5 Defence: 2/5 (relies on speed for defence) Speed: 4/5
The description needs some serious editing. The lack of punctuation notwithstanding, the judges are also looking for more details. What are the specific strengths of your characters? Any weaknesses they have? Highlight those two areas.
Also, I fail to see what it is that makes them "different." I mean, yeah, they've got fancy clothes; yeah, one of them uses magic; yeah, they're skilled with a variety of weapons; but given only what I see here, it just seems so damn ordinary. Spend a little more time with these descriptions. You still have a whole month to get it right.
well Aiden has some sort of empathy towards people thats rare to see in villains (but only if
he feels they deserv eand even though Ellixandria is deadly shes still a girl she take care of the garden cleans the house and loves dogs cats birds (as long as they dons pose a threat or get in her way)i kind of dont see how there ordinary :/
Aiden: proudly
and oh hehehheehhehehehheh sorry
i dont like making people mad at me... well unless i hate them too xD
Also, I fail to see what it is that makes them "different." I mean, yeah, they've got fancy clothes; yeah, one of them uses magic; yeah, they're skilled with a variety of weapons; but given only what I see here, it just seems so damn ordinary. Spend a little more time with these descriptions. You still have a whole month to get it right.
he feels they deserv eand even though Ellixandria is deadly shes still a girl she take care of the garden cleans the house and loves dogs cats birds (as long as they dons pose a threat or get in her way)i kind of dont see how there ordinary :/